There's a couple of typos and spelling mistakes that need to be tidied up, but other than that I like it. I agree with Baralier that it's too long and probably too complex for the Herald-Scum to print as anything other than an opinion piece, but that doesn't mean it's not worth trying.
You could also throw in references to everyone from the Conquistadors to 1950s and 60s missionaries to Aboriginal tribes if you wanted to, when mentioning the downside of Christianity and its effects upon the world.
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Date: 2005-11-10 11:51 pm (UTC)You could also throw in references to everyone from the Conquistadors to 1950s and 60s missionaries to Aboriginal tribes if you wanted to, when mentioning the downside of Christianity and its effects upon the world.